I shared this paper with my dad, who is the program director of the journalist department at the University of Arizona. He helped me organize my paper so that it read more smoothly, and he also gave me some word choice options that served as synonyms for some words that I was repeating. My dad gave me some ideas on how to clean up sentences so that they read more concisely, and did not run-on. His criticisms really helped me fix my paper so that it read in a clear way.
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