Stanton’s social media phenomenon, Humans of New York (HONY) artistically utilizes memorable personal stories and savvy imagery to portray quirks, cultural differences, and struggles of diverse individuals in order to spark passion and develop trust within his followers to accurately give first-hand perspectives to worldly themes intended to strengthen an overarching sense of global unity.
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This outline format was different than what I'm used to seeing, but that definitely isn't a bad thing! I liked how you split up your examples in your body paragraph and even added some analysis in there along with them. That is definitely useful as far as trying to remember the reason you chose that evidence to support your claim in the first place! I also really love the approach you are taking on HONY, it feels so personal, and thus will definitely draw readers in because they want to know why HONY affects people the way it does. I also made this comment on Davis' blog, but you might want to consider just a really basic or rough outline of a conclusion as well just to kind of remind you the whole goal of your paper so that it helps tie it all together. You might also want to give yourself specific examples of comments in body paragraph 4 from Stanton that you want to use. However, your analysis looks like it's going to be super interesting and I can't wait to see how it'll turn out! :)
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